Well, if you all like it, I won't go read through and change things.
my only question is why Aurens wanted to remove all trace of Eowyn from the cell. Perhaps he had put her in somewhere nicer than AJ had intended; maybe AJ wanted her in the dungeon from the start?
Honestly, I don't know. He just said it, and I went with it. I'll figure out why later, and I might just steal your idea...
But that said, when I have made up my mind about killing some poor char, I can be pretty ruthless
She's already started thinking about how to kill off AJ. Ok, so maybe I've helped that a bit.
I've even been considering killing Khorazîr, but LoR said I mustn't.
You can kill him off when he's 90+ and has lots of grandchildren running around.
Anytime before that and I stop talking to you.
I like that old man very much.
Oooh, LoR, I just saw you new sig. That's hilarious Az definitely needs some black clothes now.
And a couple CDs by My Chemical Romance or Fall Out Boy. And he
is totally emo right now. I want to snuggle him and give him a cookie and tell him that it's all going to be okay.
Btw, have you reached the halfway point of the story, or are you and LoR beyond it.
We are somewhere in Act 2. Depending on how negotiations with Elessar develop, we could quickly get to Act 3 and the big hoorah, or things could drag out with AJ being a brat.
I still want more.
Well, I'll see what I can do.
I'm a copy editor at a newspaper now, and my mornings start early (4am), so by the time I get home, yeah it's early afternoon, but I've already had a long day and don't want to think any more about words.