Question 3:
C. Admins at their discretion may split quarrelsome or disruptive posts and move them to the Bike Racks if they threaten to impinge on member rights
Jnyusa, could you explain again why it is necessary to include the phrase 'at their discretion'? It seems redundant to me in this choice.
Are you saying, admins may split quarrelsome or disruptive posts and move them to the Bike Racks if they perceive that they threaten to impinge on member rights
or are you saying, admins may, at their discretion, split quarrelsome or disruptive posts and move them to the Bike Racks, and one of the reasons they might do that is if they perceive that said posts are threatening to impinge on member rights
Question 1
• resolving disputes between individual members when these do not involve rules of the board
May I suggest:
resolving disputes between individual members when these disputes do not involve a question of a violation of board rules
Question 4: A thread in the Bike Racks forum is restricted to those members directly involved in the dispute, and administrators may delete the posts of uninvolved members who enter the thread in order to harass the participants. But edits and deletions must be done at the request of thread participants and they alone have the right to say who is party to the dispute.
May I suggest:
A thread in the Bike Racks forum is restricted to those members directly involved in the interaction, plus whomever else they designate as participants. Those who have initiated the thread may request that Administrators delete the posts of non-designated members who enter the thread.
It seems to me that adding "in order to harass the participants" is overly specific (or do I mean redundant?). Someone might come in with completely sincere intentions, but if they aren't involved or a designated participant, then their post is just as eligible for deletion as someone who has posted with malicious intent.
Question 5:"Uninvolved members should consider carefully before posting comments that they consider to be helpful without the permission of discussants. Sometimes even the most benevolent intervention serves to exacerbate the situation when it is made without the parties' consent or desire."
This statement would not apply if Question 4 is approved, is that correct? That is, if the thread is restricted to those involved or designated, then non-involved members aren't supposed to be posting, and therefore telling them to consider carefully before posting is contradictory.
My feeling is that this is an excellent statement if Bike Racks threads are not restricted to the participants and designates, but it is pointless and contradictory if the threads are restricted.
A modified statement might make more sense (in the case of restricted threads):
Members not designated to participate in a Bike Racks thread but who decide to do so in violation of the guidelines, should consider carefully, etc.
But if it is stated in the charter that Bike Racks threads are restricted, then it would be a violation of the rules to post in them if not a designated participant, and that would be cause for a hearing. So I don't think Question 5 can be included if Question 4 is approved.
Question 8:The role of the mediator is to offer an objective view of the dispute and help the parties come to an agreement. The mediation may take place in private, by PM or email, if the parties desire this.
May I suggest:
... if the parties so desire.
Edit
Jnyusa, I would be happy to be second counter (and I'll need those instructions)