Actually, I quite liked it.
You did tweak my sensertive nose with comments about showing ankles, not somethiong a decent girl would do, but the whole thing seamed to fit. Interesting Mistress Nin
Metal splinters huh......and mentioning that you would be able to make up a shortfall in your landlords income, lost from his sale of goose eggs huh.....convenient. I do wonder if that Sheriff of mine should over hear that in the bar
May even tweak my muse into production, it has been more concerned with drawing another map, this time Bree County and the lands as far as Amon Sul, the Brandywine (Baranduin), the Northdowns above Chet wood, and Cardolan down to a city called Anorast (I think, it is purloined from MERP).
Not sure when it will be finished, or sent out though *roll*
And Alandriel finally has her map...... so her excuses are shrinking to less than a trolls hygine in summer LOL